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thwopthwopthot
1 month ago
I’m not sure if the entire writing style of the novel did actually changed or if this was run through AI or what happened but this is almost completely unreadable. The last several chapters read like a robot pretending to be human. “The localized preview display was structurally limited, truncating the remainder of the message data. ” is a bizarre stilted way to say the message was cut off. “it was infinitely more statistically probable that he was simply navigating a subpar physical condition today” instead of something like “it was more likely he wasn’t feeling well”. Or “Gyu-tae’s localized behavioral parameters were radiating a profoundly bizarre reading”… what even is a “localized behavioral parameter”
I’m so sorry for the trouble this was a saturation issue if you could point out from which chapter you were facing this issue I’ll fix it from there we are trying to resolve this issue as soon as possible
I would say 85 on would be worth reviewing. There definitely was a trend prior to that towards more flowery/over-the-top language choice but it’s not so much that it’s unreadable and it can fall under a stylistic decision. Myself, I’m not a fan of it since it comes across like a 13 year old with a thesaurus wrote it but it is more in the realm of personal preference than not.
I think using the frequency of the word parameter is probably a good measure. Parameter is something you aren’t going to see regularly used in fiction writing outside of technical contexts such as IT/computers or scientific research. It can make sense that it would show up here or there in referring to aspects of game mechanics but it sticks out when it is used outside of that context.
Chapter 89 read well but it went back to robot-speak in 90 with sentences like “At the sound of Na Eun-hyeok’s voice payload, I noticed the surrounding civilian nodes pivoting their head arrays toward us”
I haven’t gotten that far. I gave up at 95 because it was hard to follow the story the way it was written. But if the chapter titles are any indication they probably have similar issues.
If You Notice any translation issues or inconsistency in names, genders, or POV etc? Let us know here in the comments or on our Discord server, and we’ll fix it in current and future chapters. Thanks for helping us to improve! 🙂
I’m not sure if the entire writing style of the novel did actually changed or if this was run through AI or what happened but this is almost completely unreadable. The last several chapters read like a robot pretending to be human. “The localized preview display was structurally limited, truncating the remainder of the message data. ” is a bizarre stilted way to say the message was cut off. “it was infinitely more statistically probable that he was simply navigating a subpar physical condition today” instead of something like “it was more likely he wasn’t feeling well”. Or “Gyu-tae’s localized behavioral parameters were radiating a profoundly bizarre reading”… what even is a “localized behavioral parameter”
I’m so sorry for the trouble this was a saturation issue if you could point out from which chapter you were facing this issue I’ll fix it from there we are trying to resolve this issue as soon as possible
I would say 85 on would be worth reviewing. There definitely was a trend prior to that towards more flowery/over-the-top language choice but it’s not so much that it’s unreadable and it can fall under a stylistic decision. Myself, I’m not a fan of it since it comes across like a 13 year old with a thesaurus wrote it but it is more in the realm of personal preference than not.
I think using the frequency of the word parameter is probably a good measure. Parameter is something you aren’t going to see regularly used in fiction writing outside of technical contexts such as IT/computers or scientific research. It can make sense that it would show up here or there in referring to aspects of game mechanics but it sticks out when it is used outside of that context.
i have fixed the issue till chapter 99 starting from 89 please do give it a read
Chapter 89 read well but it went back to robot-speak in 90 with sentences like “At the sound of Na Eun-hyeok’s voice payload, I noticed the surrounding civilian nodes pivoting their head arrays toward us”
how does 100 to 105 feel like?
I haven’t gotten that far. I gave up at 95 because it was hard to follow the story the way it was written. But if the chapter titles are any indication they probably have similar issues.
Let me look into that
It looks like it has been corrected up to 100 now. 101 went back to the weird robot speak.
Yeaa I’m fixing them part by part thank you for your patience